Skeletal

Draven

The wind whispers through the skeletal trees,

twigs snapping and bark cracking like old bones.

Pillows of snow crunch under her boots with each step.

The fog thickens around her as she continues on her way.

 

Der Wind flüstert durch die skelettierten Bäume,

zweige und Rinde knacken wie alte Knochen.

Bei jedem Schritt knirschen Schneekissen unter ihren Stiefeln.

Der Nebel verdichtet sich um sie herum, während sie ihren Weg fortsetzt.

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  • Lorna

    Came to read you and just loved this. Also enjoyed reading the German although I don't know the language except that it can be very poetical and soothing......

    • Draven

      Thank you so much!! And that is really nice to hear - I love the German language, it is really poetic and beautiful along with being very hard and direct.

    • Paul Bell

      I'm thinking she's not alone in the woods.

      • Draven

        Only time will tell!

      • Neville


        very noir ... and also very much enjoyed .. posting in both English & German is very neat too & adds an extra dimension ... what a great introduction to your writing my friend .......................... Neville

        • Draven

          Thanks for the feedback! Great to hear you like the German too πŸ™‚

        • Coyote

          Stark and vivid imagery in this one. Very nicely doneπŸ™‚

          • Draven

            Thank you!



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