Some days I feel as if I may drown.
Life can be difficult to keep your head above water.
The happiness, the sadness and the in between.
Life flows like epps and tides of the ocean.Some days I feel as if I may drown.
The waves raging within us all.
Keep my spirt and heart cleansed with the saltiness of these two things,
I then come up for air.
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Author:
Valerie Wilson (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: From my own experience, as a women, I wrote this poem after a near fatal hydroplane accident I was racing in going over 100mph and flipped my boat going for #1 in the Country. I was clocked under water for 1 minute and 30 secs. It blew my chance to be National Champion. 2nd place was very good, however that’s how life can change in a split second. Always struggling with depression and anxiety & now PTSD. I can always over come the odds.
- Category: Surrealist
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Comments4
Life is difficult, you gotta keep your head up. well said
Thank You 🙏
what an introduction to your writing .. these words proved to be .. I hope there will be many more .. Oh' and welcome to MPS .................. N
Thank You so much.
You are seriously welcome Valerie .. my pleasure entirely ..
What a tragic experience you share with us Valerie and your verse tells how in coping with aftermaths you keep heart and mind afloat with facing life's ebbs and flows a day at a time .... bravo for that spirit and welcome to M.P.S.
Thank You very much.
'but for strife, would we know
the sweetness of life?'
that is the memorable message
I took away
from your write of testimony
to fortitude's, yields..
thank you for choosing to share
congrats on your hard earned 2nd place
and for winning: in life!
Thank you very much! I love your choice of words in your feedback, gives me more to ponder on!
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