A ghostly figure appears in the distance.
Overwhelmed by curiosity, she continues ahead.
A frigorific blast of wind freezes her in her tracks.
She realises her thoughts and worries have encompassed her after all.
In der Ferne erscheint eine geisterhafte Gestalt.
Von Neugier überwältigt, geht sie weiter.
Ein eisiger Windstoß lässt sie auf der Stelle erstarren.
Sie merkt, dass ihre Gedanken und Sorgen sie doch überwältigt haben.
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this is more cleverer than many might suppose .. I take my hat off to ya and hope loads of others will too .... N
It's funny, out of all I've written and posted in the past days, this is the one I have liked the least. Yet, reading it back now, it has grown on me 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Good to hear ... & glad to be of service 🙂
You're on a roll now.
Haha I am surprised by it too! The feedback has helped a lot!
This is so beautiful. It truly paints a picture and pushes its aura onto the reader. Well done, Draven.
Thank you very much 🙂
A fine gothic poem D.
Thank you!!
Wow, I can imagine this scene. Wonderful! And a new word to look up. Thank you.
Thank you so much! haha, you are not the only one - I have had to look up almost all my prompt words in the past week!
Wow! The imagery moves from the real to the surreal so expertly here Draven. You say much in this short verse🙂
Glad I achieved that! Thanks!!
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