In your thoughts, I melt away like a candle.
Casting aside my heart, she flies away like a wisp.
Who could she be, the breeze that caresses me?
Who could she be, the mother’s voice that lulls me?
In your thoughts, I melt away like a candle.
Casting aside my heart, she flies away like a wisp.
Who could she be, the breeze that caresses me?
Who could she be, the mother’s voice that lulls me?
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Comments4
Liltingly beautiful poem such sweet words
Thank you
Short and sweet 🙂
Gorgeous and simple. Well done
I find, in your succinctly worded poem
a link, to the interconnectivity
of all things
from nurturing Nature to Heartbeat's
engulfed by desire's wings,
longing Hymns, aside
grateful musings
and all gift wrapped
with that true eloquence
of inked insight..
(such an impressive write
thank you! for choosing to share)
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