Beginning to accept the unacceptable,
the fog around her grows weak.
Seeing her surroundings for what they truly are,
the road ahead doesn't seem so bleak.
Realising in her darkest moments
her grave wisdom starts to speak.
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Author:
Draven (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by one of my favourite songs - Grave Wisdom by Bohren & der Club of Gore (German instrumental doom, jazz, ambient metal).
- Category: Gothic
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Good write D.
My poem had a different outcome:
I went out into the fog
And fell down a hole. Doh! lol.
Thanks! LOL
pain addled mind's,
make easy targets
for our mirage thoughts..
still, if it will get us past
life's bottlenecks, then its worked..
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
a genuinely thought provoking read)
Thank you!
Is this the light at the end of the tunnel, is there a twist to come.
Your guess is as good as mine!
Sounds like peace to me Draven.... took me right out of the fog..... good one!
Thank you!
I couldn't have read this at a better time. The first line says it all.
Wisdom surely spoke in this one, Draven.
A splendid poem!
Thank you so much for your feedback 🙂 I am glad it spoke to you!
Very nice - inspired.
Thank you!
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