In My Own Way

How many times have you heard someone say

You take my breath away?

I would never recite such a cliche

Lacking in rhythm and rhyme

And is hardly sublime

No, you are worthy of greater for sure

You, the only one I adore

Deserve words of beauty pure and raw

Neither would I give you anything poor

Wanting in elegance and so much more

I promise to pledge a greater array

Of a beautiful phrase not dull or grey

And you will exclaim, tell me again 

Hence, I shall convey in my own way

Powerfully elegantly I will say

My Breathe You Take Away.