Dark thoughts are no longer inhumed,
yet they are no longer active.
When they become the fore focus, she will not be angry.
If she is swallowed again by fog, she knows that the struggle makes it worse.
This is part of her.
No it isn't perfect, but it needn't be.
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Author:
Draven (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Nothing is perfect. Is it uncomfortable? Yes. Do I wish it would go away? Absolutely. Did I not decide I wanted to feel EVERYTHING? Even the bad? Like yin and yang, darkness and light both have their place
- Category: Gothic
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They both have their place . Yes . Sometimes pushing feelings away can make the feelings worse , somehow , they say to accept it … but I know how difficult that can be . I get really frustrated when I feel certain ways
Likewise. Frustration also has it's place too.
Sounds like the girl is at peace with herself. If it's going to happen, it's going to happen.
That is the idea!
that poetry inspired by the perfect word, you come across
and it just takes your mind
to a place, where
things you've been wordlessly accumulating
in your mind, get a chance to be expelled..
(or I'm way off the mark
and you just thought the word
fit well as a title, lol)
either way, thanks for sharing
The word "Inhume" is the title simply because I am doing a poetry challenge and that is the prompt word.
I'm not knowing Yin and Yang. Who are they? And what are their surnames?! lol.
Do shut up Orchi. lol.
It's not an 'inhuman' poem!
I think they're the names of someones pet dogs!?
I think they're the names of someones pet dogs!?
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Is it not our imperfections and flaws that define us our mistakes that mould us fears that form us and dreams give us our own individuality embrace them to you stare them square in the eye and say I'm unique I'm special I'm me. Powerful piece very honest.
Thank you so much!
Yin and yang described in poetically beautiful language. Excellent write🙂
Thank you!
Life with its ups and downs. Sometimes the scales fall more to 1 side. Thank you for this powerful poem and wishing you good health and happiness.
Sweet resignation to what is..... stop the struggle. Wise words j- it takes a while to get to this point and you say it so well. (And inhume as opposite of exhume brought another word to play!)
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