A circle draws upon itself
standing by the shore
watching the horizon next
somethings not to liking
yet essential enough
should the process matter
or the final destination
all set
circle of confusion draws upon itself
the words sound bitter
the efforts too hard
every moment is liking drowning
yet one day, shall laugh upon next
why worry for the process
maybe the goal seems big itself
circle of confusion draws upon itself
insults and critics heard around
the heart deprives the ground
the brain tells to retreat
yet in the name of big picture
one wishes to linger itself
circle of confusion draws itself
wish to surrender
yet a dream of childhood
is it worth to stay
stay in hard arena itself
circle of confusion draws upon itself
some loops never end
some circles never open
some knots untied remains
to those circles
see the rectangles of vision
to those confusion
watch the stars
fixing the glaze on the vision itself
alas
circle of confusion rests upon itself
when rectangle be drawn
the eraser of fate
shall diminish the circle soon….
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Author:
spilleronsheet (
Offline) - Published: December 14th, 2021 12:26
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Comments5
What goes around comes around just like fashion every 30yrs or so the mini skirt returns. Love theme very thought provoking and deep.
Wow what an analog you gave
So true
Thanks a lot
Glad you liked it
Some dilemmas that stay with us
I call them circles of confusion
Circle of Confusion !! What a wonderful correlation.
Circles don't end, but you can surely come out of the circle with your centrifugal force of optimism.
So break the the centripetal force of confusion and its time, to see the life beyond the Circle of Confusion.
Amazing write and your poem touches the depths of your inner core. !! Thanks Spiller !!
Thanks a lot dear Vamsi
You often see through me
And the best part is that there is a strong advise that makes me keep going
What a wonderful way you gave the advice
The circle of centrifugal optimism
Loved the solution which is scientifically true as well
Thanks a ton dear Vamsi
So very true that some problems go round and round, never seem to end leaving us confused and down. Yet others are resolved quite simply! Great lines.
Thanks a lot dear Rosina for your kind comments and appreciations.
I suppose the greatest circle is the one we live on. This brings wonderment, and at times, total confusion, but would we have it any other way.
Wonderment
That’s a different perspective
Thanks dear Paul for adding this depth
as we journey along this rocky path we must learn to take the rough with the smooth .. a mighty fine poem to read and reflect upon .. full marks from me my friend ....... N x
Thanks a lot Neville
Added to my score
Now this is my first full marks at poetry
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