Let me retreat
beneath the layers
into my safe space.
Here I can let my guard down
and disappear without a trace.
A sacred place to go,
where I truly am alone,
completely protected
in my subnivean zone.
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Author:
Draven (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I am not sure about this poem. I have found this word the most challenging so far, or perhaps it is because I am halfway through the poetry challenge now and it is just generally tricky!!
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You buried/gone into hibernation under the snow? Onwards to Day 15?!
It's not cheating if you write out more than one per day, and none some days. Then you could post your one per day on here!
I think I should take your advice on this one!!
To hide within one's self is often our only safe retreat. Challenge poetry sounds interesting good luck.
Thank you!
It is a challenge alright!
To hide within one's self is often our only safe retreat. Challenge poetry sounds interesting good luck.
I think we all camouflage ourselves at some point in our lives, keeps us alive.
Yes I agree. It isn't necessarily a bad thing either. As long as it isn't an escape from everything all the time, I think.
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