OK,SO YOU WANT LOVE!!!?
GO AHEAD!!! TAKE IT!!! HAVE IT!! ITS YOURS!
BUT DONT COME CRYING TO ME WHEN ITS ALL IN VEIN
AND TO PIECES YOUR HEARTS BEEN TORN!
Written by;W.J.Gerhardtπ
- Author: W.J.G.π (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: December 15th, 2021 22:04
- Comment from author about the poem: An old and very angry poemπ‘π
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 18
Comments3
Yep, love can make us bitter but when we experience love we are living life to the full. Really we should feel grateful for having lived such highs rather than bitter for having lost those highs.
So true duskβοΈπ
I think my eyes went deaf from such loud angry words,very powerful write FA, this is often true love can turn to hate and hugs to arguments, nicely done βΊ
Thank you for your kind commentβοΈπ
the impassioned capitalisation
hints at the amount of love
you have, for the person
you're trying to keep
from being heart;
now if only
we can muster that level of energy
when we're trying to prevent
that reflection in the mirror
from making those predictable
mistakes in life..
(a succinct analysation
of the complexities
in advising people, to avoid
the mistakes, we once made
so willingly..)
thanks for sharing
an intriguing read
Thanks L.B.
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