i asked myself where i wanna be in five years
he said idk but just make sure that you top tier
i have shed tears that could fill up waterfalls and piers
and on the road to success im taking the wheel to steer
lost myself back there i guess i was just done with trying
unfamiliar in the mirror where i stood but finally recognizing
the question of who i am more so than who am i
a question of am i wanting to live or am i living to die
i guess its about perspective we perceive change different
and the lesson that i get is that i received change different
in the end i can at least say i transitioned willingly
more appreciative of my past as my present continues gifting me
i know lifes a journey and certain things can become a mountain
but let these words sync as you desync from your surroundings
who are you?
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Growth and the strength to persevere, nothing you experienced in the past was in vein!!
Transitional value. Hell bent on being strong not bending towards a hell for not being strong.
'the question
of who i am, more so than who am i
a question
of am i wanting to live or am i living to die,
i guess its about perspective
we perceive change different
and the lesson that i get is that
i received change different
in the end
i can at least say i transitioned, willingly
more appreciative of my past
as my present continues
gifting me'..
(there is so much depth
in just these few lines
so reading your whole poem
is like swimming
in the deep-end of life: willingly...)
just a sublime write!
thank you for choosing to share
Yes my perception has been going through layers, like me being a jellyfish going through waves, it cause me to share a snippet of how my life has been going the last month
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