Pebbles around bare feet,
touch a leaf, hug a tree
ink a wish down to paper
and by power of whisper
let it drift carelessly
to the tender violins
of the morning breeze
Surrender to life’s photogenic seas
that which the eye intangibly sees
entrusting the river and your maker
with the destiny of your dreams
brilliant as the tattooed night sky
when all ray has dimmed to sleep
Touch a leaf, hug a tree
Stars aligned, the universe is listening
and the pebbles are seeds
- Author: Garth Rakumakoe (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: December 21st, 2021 15:12
- Comment from author about the poem: Whatever it is, write it down, and call it out to the universe.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 56
- Users favorite of this poem: Caring dove, Coyote, Fay Slimm., Nafis Light, SharonMoemise
Comments7
Beautiful writing ) liking your words 🙂
Thank you gifted one, much much appreciated.
We all need to feel like the universe is on our side … and listening ) sometimes it doesn’t feel that way tho .
I know what you mean. Faith can waiver at times. Ours is to keep the faith alive I suppose.
They say our energies are important when it comes to what we attract into our lives …makes you feel like you have to be a certain way doesn’t it .
Yes , keep the faith if we can )
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Love your way with words🙂
Thank you Coyote. Much appreciated.
This write goes straight to my favourites Garth - a piece of sound wisdom wherewith we as poets can reach the listening universe bu hugging a tree then scribing a few appreciative words
Oh thank you dear Fay, your kind words brighten up my day really :-)... Thank you so much!
Very beautiful and in touch with nature. 🙂
Thank you dear Draven. Your time appreciation is valued. Many many thanks.
I am very much liking these words of yours too Garth .............................. N
I am very much liking your liking too sir! :-).... Much gratitude to you Neville.
A lovely message. Thank you.
I thank you, Rozina. I am glad it found a place with you. Light, peace and blessings to you.
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