Garth Rakumakoe

Handheld Device

Now he’s texting to get her back

 

He would’ve felt her disbelief

and probably believed it

He would’ve heard her screams

 

He would’ve felt her arms eject his

Would’ve felt love recede

He would've heard the door slam

He would’ve, seen her leave

had he not been so handheld

by the device

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Classic modern day love chronicle

 

Comments8

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Some people are so focused on phones , technology that they forget the people around them . He should have focused on the girl lol !

    Good writing ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Garth Rakumakoe

      Very true yellowrose, that's the way modern love goes at times! Thanks for the ever pleasant visit!

      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        Technology .., itโ€™s not that interesting is it . I think sometimes people can be so focused on iPods phones and probably may have nicer time doing other things ,

      • 1 more comment

      • Fay Slimm.

        You nailed right on the dot dear Garth - - - so much passes unnoticed when holding those kind of devices - and I love the graphic which gave me a big smile.

        • Garth Rakumakoe

          Very true Fay, it almost makes one wonder whether it's the device that's handheld, or the person. Thank you for the positive feedback dear writer. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ

        • Paul Bell

          Dumped by text.
          Wonder if Shakespeare is laughing.
          Could be worse, I got dumped by letter.

          • Garth Rakumakoe

            Hahahaha... Classic Paul! ๐Ÿ˜‚

          • Teddy.15

            LOL simply brilliant, thank goodness I don't live in today's word of singleton it would drive me mad. I found this to be quite hilarious dear Garth. ๐Ÿ’–

            • Garth Rakumakoe

              Thank you Teddy. Appreciated, as always. ๐Ÿ˜Š

            • Draven

              So true! Nicely written

            • Rozina

              Exactly what's happening now. Put together so nicely, thanks.

              • Garth Rakumakoe

                Much appreciated Rozina. Thanks to you. ๐Ÿ˜‡

              • Neville


                Seriously of the momentโ€ฆ how I hanker for those halcyon days of steam, pen and paper โ€ฆ N

              • SureshG

                โ€ฆand now they fall in love the same way tooโ€ฆ..



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