ocean eyes

iyan

the beach was serene.
the tide swallowing the shoreline, its white foam tendrils licking at the foundations of sandcastles built on the edge. The air was thick with salt and the breeze slowly picked up its pace.
the sky was painted in pinks and orange as it bled into the clouds, the sun slowly descending to set. 
the lady stood at the shore, the tide lapping at her feet, the salty breeze fanning against her face. 
her surfboard lay strewn near her feet. she looks ahead of the ocean, the waves rising and falling with rhythm, matching the pace of each intake of breath. her being filled with the all so familiar feeling of comfort and serenity, a change from the usual energy and excitement she was engulfed in. 
her eyes reflected the rays of warm sunlight as they peeked through the pink and orange clouds. She looked back and her eyes landed on her friends.
their laughter filled her ears, the smiles on their faces just as beautiful as the sunset in front of her. she wished the sun hadn't set so soon. her gaze locks onto familiar forest green ones, her own eyes glistening slightly from the intense emotion spreading across her entire body. he smiled, all so familiar with her finding comfort in the beach. she returns the smile, her heart fluttering with unbridled solace
she looks ahead once again, her throat tightening as she takes in the last breath of the summer breeze this year.
She truly hopes that the snow never falls.

  • Author: iyan (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 24th, 2021 08:39
  • Comment from author about the poem: this was originally a short lil drabble about 2 original characters of mine but i decided to leave it vague here. this is one of the bigger poems i've written and it's more of a short story type poem which i don't really write a lot. this poem is more or less about the feelings of someone having seasonal depression, as they feel their last remaining place of comfort fade away as the winter kicks in. i also wanted to experiment with color psychology in my poems, adding a visual effect so as to give more feeling to the words but im not sure if i got desired effect, but i gave it try hehe.
  • Category: Short story
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Comments1

  • MDStone

    Love the imagery and feeling. Almost feel the salt on my skin. Thanks for the refreshing trip to the beach!

    • iyan

      Thank you so much!



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