Crystalline

Draven

On a cloudy day, I am healed

in the moment, the sun is revealed

  • Author: Draven (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 29th, 2021 06:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: Word prompt was the style of poetry today, I am not sure if I acheived it, but I gave it a go!
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 29
  • Users favorite of this poem: FallenAngel1🕊
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  • woundedheart

    Beauty in brevity sincere in so few words. Are you still doing your challengers ?☺

    • Draven

      Thank you 🙂 Yes, I am a bit behind - this was day 23.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Less can be more in poetry -well done with this little gem Draven

      • Draven

        I totally agree! Thank you for your kind words, Fay 🙂

      • orchidee

        Good write D.

        • Draven

          Thank you!

        • Rozina

          2 lines that explain the situation. Wonderful.

          • Draven

            Thank you so much 🙂

          • Neville



            & in that moment, the truth is crystalised ............ it dont take a lot to please this old fella, does it ... N 🙂

            • Draven

              It's the little things 🙂



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