Closet, Still Open. Again, It's Cold Enough 4 My Blue Jacket.
Rocket Emblazoned On The Back. Yeah, It's Rather Trendy.
Quietly, I Get On Outside. Surprisingly, Nobody N Our Full House Noticed.
Brightened N Spirit By Both Warmth & Night. Quite Alright. Feeling The Pricy Timepiece N My Pocket.
Sunset Was Hours Ago. The People Passing R Only Familiar As I Enjoy This Time On The Driveway.
Stray Cat Following A Pretty Girl I Used 2 Go With Keeps Me Smirking.
Hurting Head Eases The More I Remember Just How Much I Love My Ol' Blue Jacket.
Let Me Tell About How I Got It Another Time.
Dime, Then A Dollar Found N The Same Inner Pocket. Can't Remember When I Put Them There.
Air Bounces Off My Blue Jacket. No Wonder, My Blue Jacket, I So Adore.
Store, Here I Come. I've Lucked Up On Just Enough 2 Buy Whatever Interesting Packet. If The Right Clerk Is N I'll B Able 2 Get @ Least 2.
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Author:
Broken Ankh (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 6th, 2022 22:06
- Comment from author about the poem: 2 Have So Favored A Jacket.
- Category: Surrealist
- Views: 10
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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Comments2
I really enjoy
this kind of focused poetry
a topic, so personal
and somewhat random
yet, 'a slice of life'
unfurled, deep dived
and presented, poetically relatable
for all to delve within,
in such a succinct
yet poignantly detailed write..
(you really showcase
how much effort, you've put in
to this inking thing, we do
as your practised skill, overflows
and demonstrates the ease
with which you roll your thoughts
in-to eloquently worded, art
still, the hardest skill
known to humanity)
thanks for sharing
and H appy N ew Y ear, dear poet
I Thank You 2 The Utmost Of Greatly, Esteemed Peer. May Your New Year B Filled With Happiness & Blessings As Well.
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