Seems I need a cleaning

aOnceSoloExistence

Sing me a song

Mr. piano man

Sing me a song

Tonight

 

It’s a beautiful life

If only I could

Loosen my minds grip

On these heavy weighing thoughts

 

The road is visible 

Foggy night though

Seems I need a cleaning

A cleansing should do real fine

  • Author: aOnceSoloExistence (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 6th, 2022 22:19
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  • L. B. Mek

    yes, Winter's New year
    out with the old, in readiness
    for that Spring cleaning of our lives
    in the coming months
    to open hopeful pathways, to those Summer
    highlight's of life..
    (for poetic purposes
    kindly, choose
    to ignore, there's usually
    more than three season's in a year
    forgive me, I'm a lazy wannabe poet
    so it took all I had
    to make my elongated, metaphor
    stretch to cover the three seasons...) lol
    a great shorty, thanks for sharing
    forgive me for having fun in your comments
    I meant no disrespect, just
    my roundabout way
    of showing my appreciation

    • aOnceSoloExistence

      Lol creative, but I do feel you’ve taken a bit too much a liking…I appreciate your appreciation, but let’s tone it down a bit, ey?



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