To think!...That I could ever have thought,
that I could flee from love.
To be rid of its pain,
in all its glory.
When I sit and really contemplate,...really weigh the implications of such a foolish chosen path,....
How could I ever have been so blind
To think of all Id be leaving behind
Im so greatful for all this enlightenment I find
I feel as though I am on cloud nine
in this little world of mine
I thank you all
Now take a bow
And brightly shine.
Written by;W.J.Gerhardt🕊
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Author:
W.J.G.🕊 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 6th, 2022 22:37
- Comment from author about the poem: I can t thank you all enough!😘💝🤗💐🍾🏆🍻🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟✌️🕊
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You coming down to earth? Or staying on that cloud?!
Is it called Cloud 9 cos the No.9 bus goes there?!
I talk some rot sometimes. lol.
No #9 bus,but there's a #9 train lol😄✌️🕊
(forgive me
I kinda runaway with my imagination, in my reply dear poet
I blame your inspirational words.. lol)
yes well, we'll gladly take the plaudits
for your romantic bone's, resurgence
just, you know
don't be too harsh, with us
if things don't work out
and you
need an outlet, to blame
kindly remember
our messages, were themed
'get back on the horse'
but
we never actually, chose the horse
for you
nor, did we guarantee
that all wild horses, could be tamed
by love, alone...
When I shared my dark,sad,depressing poems on here,..when I was still new here at MPS ,I didn't really know what to expect in regards to response,feedback and acceptance. I can't help to be overwhelmed😎
Nice poem , fallen Angel 🙂🙂.
I love the acceptance and support on here .
Thanks rose,it's truly overwhelming💖 P.s.i found some yellow(& pink) roses in my emojies,..💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐just for you😘
Lol Thankyou ! 🙂🙂 it is really nice to receive such support . I have tried other sites but it just isn’t the same as on here ..
About 4 years ago I was on a site sharing my poems,got a comment or 2 which was nice but I got pretty discouraged and didn't try any other sites again until late last year,and I so glad I did because I found MPS. I'm so pleased with all I've found here,I have no need to look any further. MPS is my EPS(Emergency Poetry Services) lol🤗💐
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