Man and Existence

ajayamitabh7

Birds jump to the branches of

trees at sunrise,

But in the morning man

wrestles with whys.


Why do there seem to be

too many cuckoos?

Why chirping so noisy  

what are the clues?

 

In morning the sleep

descends from its core,

and chittering of pigeons

hurts a man more.


There is a  lot of tension and

a lot of stress.

Working late at night is a

suffering a mess.

 

Yes fatigue on mind,

whenever Man feels,

At times, smoking or

drinking  appeals.


At roaming late night

the cosmos retort.

A Reckless  freedom  is  

not its support.

 

Be it testy coca-cola or

a pizza or a cake,

Nature always opposes

without a mistake.

 

The sweet, the chicken,

the fish, juicy curd,

The cosmos  advises

that these are absurd.

 

While Orderly pattern is

nature's workforce,

But  freedom is nature of

a man of  course.


As many are options and

choices  so gobs. 

A  Man and this nature are

always at odds.

 

Ajay Amitabh Suman:

All Right Reserved

  • Author: ajayamitabh7 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 9th, 2022 23:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: This existence is regulated by strict orderly pattern and discipline. A Man,on the contrary, by his very own nature desires freedom from everything ,be it any kind of control, discipline, rules, order or regulation etc. He treats the same as different types of bondages. In such a scenario , Conflict between a man and the existence is bound to happen.
  • Category: Spiritual
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  • ianshatss

    Loved this! So well done!

  • ajayamitabh7

    Thanks

  • spilleronsheet

    Very beautiful
    Flowed with so ease
    Like a brook
    Unceasing and fluid
    Liked these lines -
    While Orderly pattern is

    nature's workforce,

    But freedom is nature of

    a man of course.


    As many are options and

    choices so gobs.

    A Man and this nature are

    always at odds.


    The poetry was very apt and thought provoking
    Thanks for sharing dear poet

    • ajayamitabh7

      Thanks for appreciating my little effort in so many encouraging words.

    • L. B. Mek

      'But in the morning
      man
      wrestles, with *why's.'
      a really good effort
      some insightful commentary
      and important questioning
      of societies, more subtle
      status quo, characteristics..
      thanks for sharing

      • ajayamitabh7

        Thanks for appreciating.



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