Death is a sincere fear.
Believing but doubting,
Non-stop judgment
From others around you.
Death is a big topic in this world.
Is heaven real?
Do we all go to haven?
Death is scary.
Death does not reveal.
What if you are not good enough for heaven?
If you are not good enough here,
Why would you be in heaven?
In the end,
Where do you go?
Heaven?
Hell?
Judgment day,
He will think I didn’t believe in him.
All of these doubts hit me.
I want to give up.
No one understands.
They don’t understand the fact
That I feel alone,
like a nobody.
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Tiffany McClure (Pseudonym) (
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I know the feeling. But I believe hell is reserved for only those who give up on life. That's how precious life is. That God does not forgive under any circumstances whatsoever those who give up.
I think of all the life on all the planets in our solar system,our MilkyWay Galaxy,..not much life out there to think of. And then there's earth,with its abundance of life,and us. It's really quite incredible and speaks volumes of how unique and precious life is. I truly believe this,I'm not a religious person by no means,but if it wasn't for this one little belief,I probably wouldn't be here today. I've locked it away in my heart and threw away the key. Sorry for such a long reply,but we're a really friendly bunch here at MPS,we comment on one another's poems,take part in fusioned poems,and find support and inspiration among one another. Welcome to MPS,I look forward to reading more from you.😀✌️🕊
Aww, thank you so much. I love to write and the only thing I'm good at writing is poems I wrote a short story and it was fun and all but it just doesn't speak me I guess. hey if you ever have any questions please just ask. I'm an open book.
Thanks,that's great to know,I too am an open book😊💐
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