th3rdeye

A State of Transition

only gone take a little time i knew i was ready for the shine

no shade in the world can block my light theres no watch that can tell my time

no person can kill my vibe nobody cant tell me i aint tried

sometimes liquor and pain just coincides 

i avoided suicide i smiled outside but inside you couldn't tell it

you gotta push the envelope in life just dont forget to mail it

my road to success im dodging the potholes

my auras on point now i feel the energy comin from the cosmos 

no more why me's no talks of could of beens

no shame of being me not mad at the lack of helping hands 

i dusted off and tried again i prayed god for another win, i did

i transition virtues and im starting to see life in full circle

got damaged from not knowing but they say what u dont know wont hurt you

i beg to differ tho im starting to alleviate the miniscule

when you pass how will they mention you 

 

 

Comments2

  • L. B. Mek

    'there's no watch that can tell
    my time
    no person
    can kill, my vibe
    nobody cant tell me, I ain't
    tried

    sometimes, liquor and pain
    just coincide

    I avoided suicide
    smiling it away, on the outside
    keeping it hidden away
    deep inside

    you, always lacked
    the insight
    to witness
    grim reality's, fight

    gotta push the envelope
    in life
    just dont forget
    to mail it

    my road to success
    I'm dodging the potholes
    my aura, is on point
    now I feel energy, comin
    from the cosmos

    no more why me's
    no talks of could-have-been's'
    (Brilliant!
    sorry for rudely making suggestion to your wording, dear poet
    I meant no disrespect
    I just humbly wanted to make your wisdom
    accessible to a wider audience..
    thank you for sharing, brother
    I'll strive to heed your words
    and shining example
    in my life's. dogged fight!)

    • th3rdeye

      I appreciate what you said I love how you critique, but I write it like that on purpose, it's just more of a raw feeling. I wish we could upload more than one everyday.

    • KomfortKorner

      💯



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