only gone take a little time i knew i was ready for the shine
no shade in the world can block my light theres no watch that can tell my time
no person can kill my vibe nobody cant tell me i aint tried
sometimes liquor and pain just coincides
i avoided suicide i smiled outside but inside you couldn't tell it
you gotta push the envelope in life just dont forget to mail it
my road to success im dodging the potholes
my auras on point now i feel the energy comin from the cosmos
no more why me's no talks of could of beens
no shame of being me not mad at the lack of helping hands
i dusted off and tried again i prayed god for another win, i did
i transition virtues and im starting to see life in full circle
got damaged from not knowing but they say what u dont know wont hurt you
i beg to differ tho im starting to alleviate the miniscule
when you pass how will they mention you
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'there's no watch that can tell
my time
no person
can kill, my vibe
nobody cant tell me, I ain't
tried
sometimes, liquor and pain
just coincide
I avoided suicide
smiling it away, on the outside
keeping it hidden away
deep inside
you, always lacked
the insight
to witness
grim reality's, fight
gotta push the envelope
in life
just dont forget
to mail it
my road to success
I'm dodging the potholes
my aura, is on point
now I feel energy, comin
from the cosmos
no more why me's
no talks of could-have-been's'
(Brilliant!
sorry for rudely making suggestion to your wording, dear poet
I meant no disrespect
I just humbly wanted to make your wisdom
accessible to a wider audience..
thank you for sharing, brother
I'll strive to heed your words
and shining example
in my life's. dogged fight!)
I appreciate what you said I love how you critique, but I write it like that on purpose, it's just more of a raw feeling. I wish we could upload more than one everyday.
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