Recently
I am lost to myself
In my mind
There is an endless crowd
I can’t stop them
Can’t hear outside
No one notices
No one sees
What I am going through
What am I doing in here?
Suddenly
Sky disappeared
Turned down
When I most needed
No eager to move on anymore
Just waiting for redemption
Just come take me
Save me
From this empty
Strange place.
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Author:
Jamie Stewart (
Offline) - Published: January 13th, 2022 13:03
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Comments2
Thank you for sharing. Your poem is very beautiful in its sadness. ‘In my mind there’s an endless crowd’ I think I can relate to that. Take care and keep going.
Solar Impulse
I am so glad that you like it. Recently all I desire is to control that endless crowd inside me, someday- somehow it'll be done eventually.
Appreciated for your comment.
Sincerely
Jamie Stewart
this i can so relate to. so many me’s inside of me.
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