Jamie Stewart

Save Me

Recently

I am lost to myself

 

In my mind

There is an endless crowd

 

I can’t stop them

Can’t hear outside

 

No one notices 

No one sees

 

What I am going through

What am I doing in here?

 

Suddenly

Sky disappeared

 

Turned down

When I most needed

 

No eager to move on anymore

Just waiting for redemption

 

Just come take me

Save me

 

From this empty

Strange place.

Comments1

  • Solar Impulse_1912

    Thank you for sharing. Your poem is very beautiful in its sadness. ‘In my mind there’s an endless crowd’ I think I can relate to that. Take care and keep going.
    Solar Impulse

    • Jamie Stewart

      I am so glad that you like it. Recently all I desire is to control that endless crowd inside me, someday- somehow it'll be done eventually.

      Appreciated for your comment.

      Sincerely
      Jamie Stewart



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