Dead inside

I’m pretty dead inside

Should I commit suicide?

Or should I be left wondering

If I was raised by someone loving

Would I be better off? 

Or would people still scoff

Scoff at this pathetic life form

Who’s heart is forever torn

My life is such a mess.

Honestly, the only option left

Is death.


  • Laura🌻

    Dear DepressedMess24,

    NO not death, definitely NOT death!


  • Buzz Bray

    Please get help. Tell someone. To write verse like this, you must have beauty inside.

  • fallenAngel1🕊

    WOW! All that in a mere 55 words. I feel so much coming out of your words here,..disappointment,anger,defeat,sadness,a scence of being lost,..and alone. To express,and evoke so much in so few words , a tell tale sign of a true poetess. Extremely well done.🏆🌹Take a bow and shine💎bright🌟

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