I’m pretty dead inside
Should I commit suicide?
Or should I be left wondering
If I was raised by someone loving
Would I be better off?
Or would people still scoff
Scoff at this pathetic life form
Who’s heart is forever torn
My life is such a mess.
Honestly, the only option left
Is death.
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Author:
Ajax (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sad
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- Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, FallenAngel1🕊
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Comments3
Dear DepressedMess24,
NO not death, definitely NOT death!
Laura🌻
Please get help. Tell someone. To write verse like this, you must have beauty inside.
WOW! All that in a mere 55 words. I feel so much coming out of your words here,..disappointment,anger,defeat,sadness,a scence of being lost,..and alone. To express,and evoke so much in so few words ,..is a tell tale sign of a true poetess. Extremely well done.🏆🌹Take a bow and shine💎bright🌟
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