Vamsi Sudha

HEAR Your HEART!!!

 

The Heart, always creates Commotion
Wants always undue Attention
Measures size of a Fist
Powerful enough to render life a Twist

 

Reigns the entire Body
Not a minute it rests, in its Entirety
Elated when it nears, life's: Exciting
Depressed when discerning fate's, Devastating

 

A store house of feelings, in Immense
Just as its murmur of Lub-Love, waits for Love
And its Dub-Dubbed, Spreads out Affection...
Works round the clock, with Perfection!!

 

Worries, sadness changes the rhythm of Heart
Let Self-discipline rule core of Heart
And let the compass of your goal, take Form
And guide your life in every Storm!!!

 

It’s always a state of ART
so "Hear" the murmur of the "Heart "
Let’s not the Heat of Heart Disrupt
Tie it with a Goal which does not Depart!!!

 

Comments4

  • Thekkinkkattil

    A nice read. A very sensible advice to the heart

    • Vamsi Sudha

      Thanks for stopping and commenting !! 🙂

    • L. B. Mek

      'Reigns, over our entire Body
      Not a minute it rests, in its Entirety
      Elated when it nears, life's: Exciting
      Depressed when discerning fate's, Devastating'..
      (a wonderful write
      forgive me for rudely, interfering
      with some of your verse
      I meant no disrespect, dear poet)
      thanks for sharing

      • Vamsi Sudha

        Not at all dear Poet !! You are an awesome poet and I deeply appreciate your poetry !! Thanks for giving me pointers of correction. Constructive criticism is always welcome for improvement.
        Thanks for your inputs and please feel free to let me know always 🙂

        • Vamsi Sudha

          Took your inputs and here it goes with your inputs !! thanks a ton !!

        • spilleronsheet

          And these lines gleamed through my eyes
          Shining inside
          In a sense of self doubt
          The words came as ladder to rung oneself up
          Very eloquent and beautiful poetry

          • Vamsi Sudha

            Thanks spiller , glad you connected with it !! A rush of feelings and words just carve out....

          • Job welime

            Worries, sadness changes the rhythm of Heart
            Let Self-discipline rule core of Heart
            And let the compass of your goal, take Form
            And guide your life in every Storm,
            This one is so personal to me,I kinda needed it at this time,
            Thanks dear poet for such a nice write.

            • Vamsi Sudha

              Thanks Job for your frank acceptance !!



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