The Heart, always creates Commotion
Wants always undue Attention
Measures size of a Fist
Powerful enough to render life a Twist
Reigns the entire Body
Not a minute it rests, in its Entirety
Elated when it nears, life's: Exciting
Depressed when discerning fate's, Devastating
A store house of feelings, in Immense
Just as its murmur of Lub-Love, waits for Love
And its Dub-Dubbed, Spreads out Affection...
Works round the clock, with Perfection!!
Worries, sadness changes the rhythm of Heart
Let Self-discipline rule core of Heart
And let the compass of your goal, take Form
And guide your life in every Storm!!!
It’s always a state of ART
so "Hear" the murmur of the "Heart "
Let’s not the Heat of Heart Disrupt
Tie it with a Goal which does not Depart!!!
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Author:
Vamsi Sudha (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Struggle of Heart at tough times of Life !!
- Category: Reflection
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A nice read. A very sensible advice to the heart
Thanks for stopping and commenting !! 🙂
'Reigns, over our entire Body
Not a minute it rests, in its Entirety
Elated when it nears, life's: Exciting
Depressed when discerning fate's, Devastating'..
(a wonderful write
forgive me for rudely, interfering
with some of your verse
I meant no disrespect, dear poet)
thanks for sharing
Not at all dear Poet !! You are an awesome poet and I deeply appreciate your poetry !! Thanks for giving me pointers of correction. Constructive criticism is always welcome for improvement.
Thanks for your inputs and please feel free to let me know always 🙂
Took your inputs and here it goes with your inputs !! thanks a ton !!
And these lines gleamed through my eyes
Shining inside
In a sense of self doubt
The words came as ladder to rung oneself up
Very eloquent and beautiful poetry
Thanks spiller , glad you connected with it !! A rush of feelings and words just carve out....
Worries, sadness changes the rhythm of Heart
Let Self-discipline rule core of Heart
And let the compass of your goal, take Form
And guide your life in every Storm,
This one is so personal to me,I kinda needed it at this time,
Thanks dear poet for such a nice write.
Thanks Job for your frank acceptance !!
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