snow frosted wolf moon
white orb in lavender skies
greets winter sunrise
- Author: Janice Mathis (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 18th, 2022 09:33
- Comment from author about the poem: inspired by this morning's moon
- Category: Haiku
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Thank you so much for reading and your kind comments! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!
This is so beautiful 😍
Thank You! I'm so happy you think so!
Didn't it though? I was mesmerized by it this morning as I drove to work...
Good write GL.
Thank you!
I just fell in love with those seventeen syllables you arranged so superbly up there, over three perfectly placed lines .. excellent ink if you dont mind me saying ...
Neville 🙂
Of course, I don't mind you saying...I appreciate very much you saying so actually 🙂 Thank you!
LOVELY!
So kind of you to say! Thank you!
These few lines really enhance the picture you chose - first rate haiku
Thank you! I'm happy you think so! 🙂
Some mornings, as we wait on my daughter's school bus, the moon waits with us. And some mornings, as she fades away, I mourn for the beauty that is passing away for another month. An excellent haiku. Very traditional.
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