Blue , pink , green
I’m a colour that you like so you talk to me
upbeat , dancing , vibrant and positive petals of words are given to you
so you talk to me
but if I talk grey and black to you
dull skies and negative weather
and I’m not the shiny sun that you want me to be
you wouldn’t want to listen
avoid me like that person avoiding a walk in the rain
blue , pink , and green
all positive and perfect in your eyes
and this is the way you want me to be
so you take interest like the sun taking interest in an upbeat rainbow
if I’m grey and dull , a not so perfect sky
not the way you want me to be
would you walk away
why do I have to be a perfect colour for you
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Blue,pink,green
be any colour you please
Green,pink blue
As long as it pleases you
It will be the perfect hue😘
Your expressions here are fantastic rose,...but stop trying so hard to please others so much,..your way too hard on yourself. Go pamper yourself with a nice relaxing spa day💐☕️💋✌️🕊
Thankyou fallen Angel .. I think sometimes others want us to be a certain way , and we can’t always please them . Sometimes people might avoid you because they think you might be negative or they prefer talking to you because your all positive and perfect lol .. that’s what I was thinking about .
We can’t always please others tho can we . And nobody is ‘ perfect ‘
Glad you like this , thanks
As the old saying goes,let he/she/they without sin cast the first stone
I say let he/she/they with illusions of perfection be left all alone,..because they are.
I think you are a rainbow prismed .. recently set free from a dark grey prison ......................... you are darn near perfectly hued & yellow suits ya write down to the ground ........ 🙂
Thankyou Neville . Kind of you to say ))
I certainly have felt in some very dark places in my life ( in my past ) and sometimes I do feel a lot more peaceful . And like somehow I’m finding myself , even if just a little
Some people expect perfection but it will never happen .. and some people believe they are perfect when they are not .
There were shift in my favours for those colours
From blue, pink, green, yellow and orange
To blood red
Settling for dark shades
Black and white two contrasting appealed
Black shouted bold while white talked about calmness
While too simplistic grey Came in mind
Choose the colours as you like
Once again a power packed poetry
I choose the colour as per my taste
Yes, as Angel says - don't worry too much about pleasing others all the time; certainly don't worry about enduring my singing and smiling sweetly throughout - through grated teeth! lol.
Well Rose, you are indeed the refreshingly perfect colour for all your fans here on mps, that's for sure.
Your poem today is for me you at your best. Into my favourites for sure.
May those colours always shine in your life yellowrose.
Andy
Thankyou Andy 🙂
I feel this at times too, you describe it so beautifully.
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