Perfect colour for you

Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

Blue , pink , green 

I’m a colour that you like so you talk to me 

upbeat , dancing , vibrant and positive petals of words are given to you 

so you talk to me 


but if I talk grey and black to you 

dull skies and negative weather 

and I’m not  the shiny sun that you want me to be 

you wouldn’t want to listen 

avoid me like that person avoiding a walk in the rain 


blue , pink , and green 

all positive and perfect in your eyes 

and this is the way you want me to be 

so you take interest like the sun taking interest in an upbeat rainbow 


if I’m grey and dull , a not so perfect sky 

not the way you want me to be 

would you walk away 


why do I have to be a perfect colour for you 



  • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

    be any colour you please
    Green,pink blue
    As long as it pleases you
    It will be the perfect hue😘
    Your expressions here are fantastic rose,...but stop trying so hard to please others so much,..your way too hard on yourself. Go pamper yourself with a nice relaxing spa dayπŸ’β˜•οΈπŸ’‹βœŒοΈπŸ•Š

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      Thankyou fallen Angel .. I think sometimes others want us to be a certain way , and we can’t always please them . Sometimes people might avoid you because they think you might be negative or they prefer talking to you because your all positive and perfect lol .. that’s what I was thinking about .

      We can’t always please others tho can we . And nobody is β€˜ perfect β€˜

      Glad you like this , thanks

      • FallenAngel1πŸ•Š

        As the old saying goes,let he/she/they without sin cast the first stone
        I say let he/she/they with illusions of perfection be left all alone,..because they are.

      • Neville

        I think you are a rainbow prismed .. recently set free from a dark grey prison ......................... you are darn near perfectly hued & yellow suits ya write down to the ground ........ πŸ™‚

        • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

          Thankyou Neville . Kind of you to say ))

          I certainly have felt in some very dark places in my life ( in my past ) and sometimes I do feel a lot more peaceful . And like somehow I’m finding myself , even if just a little

          Some people expect perfection but it will never happen .. and some people believe they are perfect when they are not .

        • spilleronsheet

          There were shift in my favours for those colours
          From blue, pink, green, yellow and orange
          To blood red
          Settling for dark shades
          Black and white two contrasting appealed
          Black shouted bold while white talked about calmness
          While too simplistic grey Came in mind
          Choose the colours as you like
          Once again a power packed poetry
          I choose the colour as per my taste

        • orchidee

          Yes, as Angel says - don't worry too much about pleasing others all the time; certainly don't worry about enduring my singing and smiling sweetly throughout - through grated teeth! lol.

        • dusk arising

          Well Rose, you are indeed the refreshingly perfect colour for all your fans here on mps, that's for sure.

          Your poem today is for me you at your best. Into my favourites for sure.

        • Goldfinch60

          May those colours always shine in your life yellowrose.


        • ellegee3

          I feel this at times too, you describe it so beautifully.

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