Summer was our prime
Fun. Free . Feeling
Not one worry in the world
In love , bound together by choice
School
Distracting each other from our love
More days reminiscing about that summer
The summer we connected our bodies together
The summer we whispered “I love you” so often
The summer we shared tears and memories together
School
Unexpected twists and turns questioned if our bond
Was as unbreakable as we thought
Hurtful words, constant breaks, insecurities and words that
Never should have been spoken. Those words and burns from separation
Still tear at us today
But , The love never went away ,just suppressed
The memories never were forgotten just faded
Those once whispered “I love you “ still as meaningful as before
So please instead of the summer we once shared
Lets continue to make new memories.
That love will never be forgotten.
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Author:
ambitiousC (
Offline) - Published: January 20th, 2022 01:10
- Comment from author about the poem: This is the poem I wrote to my first love it expresses the best part of a relationship and sometimes the downfall of one. Please be open and honest about my poem
- Category: Love
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Comments1
really like the details
and the structure or form
you gave to your stanzas
to help reinforce your points,
a really good read, wonderfully relatable
thanks for sharing
Thank you so much for the amazing feed back 🙂
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