Behold

Draven

The years of chatter

Slowly and suddenly came to rest

 

Finally, all was still

A magnificent sight to behold

 

I lost my head

But gained the world

  • Author: Draven (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 20th, 2022 07:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: Final day of the poetry challenge. Thank you all tremendously for your feedback and support. I am so grateful that I have found this community and will continue to write and read here :) This poem was inspired by Douglas Harding's Moment of Discovery. https://www.headless.org/on-having-no-head.htm
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  • Views: 17
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments5

  • L. B. Mek

    such a great demonstration
    of the power
    in succinctly wording our poetry,
    that sense of
    self-empowered, liberation!
    just jumps-off your page..
    thanks for sharing

    • Draven

      Thank you for your wonderful feedback!

    • dusk arising

      A reakisation of who you are and that the world is your oyster.

      • Draven

        🙂 Thank you!

      • orchidee

        I behold a fine poem D! lol.

        • Draven

          Haha, thank you!!

        • Rozina

          Good luck. Wonderful poems, enjoyed reading them.

          • Draven

            Thank you

          • Neville


            I reckon this is among the very best that you have yet posted .. 10/10 .. and good old Douglas Harding is what I say .... Neville

            • Draven

              Thank you so much!!



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