The years of chatter
Slowly and suddenly came to rest
Finally, all was still
A magnificent sight to behold
I lost my head
But gained the world
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Author:
Draven (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Final day of the poetry challenge. Thank you all tremendously for your feedback and support. I am so grateful that I have found this community and will continue to write and read here :) This poem was inspired by Douglas Harding's Moment of Discovery. https://www.headless.org/on-having-no-head.htm
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Comments5
such a great demonstration
of the power
in succinctly wording our poetry,
that sense of
self-empowered, liberation!
just jumps-off your page..
thanks for sharing
Thank you for your wonderful feedback!
A reakisation of who you are and that the world is your oyster.
🙂 Thank you!
I behold a fine poem D! lol.
Haha, thank you!!
Good luck. Wonderful poems, enjoyed reading them.
Thank you
I reckon this is among the very best that you have yet posted .. 10/10 .. and good old Douglas Harding is what I say .... Neville
Thank you so much!!
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