I knew it was wrong, when I begged god for you to stay.
Even if it meant to be unhappy. Thats how much Ive loved you, this love poisoned me before it began.
But if that meant being five more minutes with you. I would have gladly drank it again.
I was more alone than I was with you, atleast it was what I bargained.
Five more minutes I thought, before u left me again.
Tell me, how to fight for love, if you never met me halfway?
Its been a long time of loneliness for me to stay .
It is just me now, like always, all alone.
I promise u to never see you again.
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Author:
ZuZu (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 26th, 2022 08:24
- Comment from author about the poem: Ive never written a poem before. I could never tell how i felt during my relationship so I put all of my words in here. Maybe very amateur, but it helped me to understand myself better
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
When you have a beautiful thing,
you wont throw it in the bin;
Loving feels good today,
I smiled when you came my way,
I wont cry when you go away;
If I really loved you,
If this loving was true,
I store the memory in a safe place,
So I smile when I see your face;
Deep feelings well expressed. I like it. Don't mind my writing
I love your poem, and I understand the feelings inside❤️🩹
Zuzu, don't stop! It's good therapy, and your sincerity makes it moving and tender. Remember, a poem speaks to your audience as well as yourself. Avoid being maudlin or predictable. The end of this is chilling... be well!
PS What a picture... very fitting selection
Dear,
Thank you for your compliments and tips. English is my 3rd language so perhaps i struggle sometimes with finding the words. I choose the picture according to how i felt when writing that poem, very dark time, but I got out of it 🙂 perhaps ill write more happy poems from now on!
Take care
Third language? wonderful! My third language is German... I haven't written a poem in German since high school in 1972! But I still read some. Bravo!
Ah perhaps for you a new challenge to work on!! Im still writing poems, perhaps not really good ones. However, with practice perhaps i will be able to express myself better. Nothing more wonderful than expressing your feelings to strangers that seem to find a common ground with you.
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