Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some U.S.law-breakers - - - - am still chuckling at the scene your pen paints today Nev. - - and well if that takes your fancy am handing you the wooden spoon now................x
you raise a very pertinent question YR .......................................... maybe someone here might provide an answer ........................... maybe ................................ Neville
The loose black coats and the enormous courts told a tale of the prisoner locked up twice in jail for the same mistake of waking late
Another great write dear Neville
A witty poetry you laced
A satire at the pen’s mistake
I always feel sorry for those
that hate me
for they begin, so belatedly
or maybe, its just that
I began, so despairingly early..
(a great write!
you lead, I will strive
to follow, dear Masterful Poet)
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Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some U.S.law-breakers - - - - am still chuckling at the scene your pen paints today Nev. - - and well if that takes your fancy am handing you the wooden spoon now................x
.................................... Ouch muchas gracias M'lady ............................................ 🙂 x
We treat others a certain way , then get angry when they do the same to us . So why treat others a certain way , if we hate it so much ?
you raise a very pertinent question YR .......................................... maybe someone here might provide an answer ........................... maybe ................................ Neville
The loose black coats and the enormous courts told a tale of the prisoner locked up twice in jail for the same mistake of waking late
Another great write dear Neville
A witty poetry you laced
A satire at the pen’s mistake
you can beat an egg but you just can't beat a bit of satire can ya ................. thanks a bundle spills 🙂 x
So true…i can see the hidden smirk
Definitely, spread the beating around, and who knows, when the beating finally ends, just restart it.
sometimes a kickstart is all that is required ....................................... maybe .. cheers Paul 🙂
I always feel sorry for those
that hate me
for they begin, so belatedly
or maybe, its just that
I began, so despairingly early..
(a great write!
you lead, I will strive
to follow, dear Masterful Poet)
it seems we think along very similar ........................................................................'s brother Mek 🙂
Wonderful use of language. Each word impactful. Wow!
thank you kindly sir ... much appreciated & then some .............. Neville
Don't beat yourself up over this, she said, I'll gladly do that for you.
................................................................................................. ouch 🙂
Do unto others …..
So much said in so few words. Wonderful.
cheers Roz .................................. much appreciated .......................................... Neville 🙂
I won't meet this lass! lol.
she wants your full postal address & contact number .............................................. 🙂
Lol,good chuckles here Neville😆✌🕊
Cheers fallenAngel 1🕊 ........................... you just made my evening sir 🙂
Haha, wow, so much spoken in such few words. I love poems like these. Well done.
I like well done's unless we are talking steak ............ so thank you Draven, I take mine rare 🙂
Haha yes, good answer, me too! I take mine the rare side of medium 🙂
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