Thoughts 8
Lover’s Loss
I gave you everything I had
My heart, my soul, my mind gone mad
…You never gave a damn for me.
What’s remembered
It’s the whiskey and the music that’s remembered
In the dimness and the smoke of the honkytonk
When your heart has been dismembered
by the lady on the “Buckin’ Bronc”.
Decide
Stop crying over me that sea of blue.
Am I forever losing you
Or are we simply, through?
Heartfelt
This love-lost night falls mournfully
and will linger evermore
For I am feeling poorly now
heartsick at your door.
By the fire
Sitting by the fire
trying to stoke the coldhearted embers
I find no comfort in lost desire
No hope that she remembers.
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MendedFences27 (
Offline) - Published: January 27th, 2022 20:08
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Comments3
Very nice use of language. Efficient, concise, powerful. I like it!
Thank you B.B. I find these short poems can get me out of the doldrums and start me writing again.
once more thanks for taking the time to comment.
Sad but such romantic and poetic reflections on what love can put us through Phil.....those last thoughts by the fireside melted this reader's heart.
Thank you, Fay. Trying to get back into the swing of things. These short expressions, I hope, will help get me started. Thank you for commenting today.
You may have been away for a while but you still have it sir .. my word you do ................................... Neville
Thank you for the compliment. I'm hoping this post gets me going again.
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