It's like '08 durin' the summer and I so love Natasha I. but
it fell through and I don't know why
Isn't it sad but true that she's the best I ever met, with all due respect
I'm not tryina say that we had sex.. it's just.. texts
They say that you shouldn't kiss and tell and..
I'm not tryina say that we messed
My cousin Carla told me that I'd miss those days
The carelessness and the truth is that I can't put my finger on it but it feels like that song by The Pixies, Where Is My Mind?
She was so sweet
Honey and all these other pet names
Pink surfer was 1 for some reason
My love for about a season
November came not hearin' much from her then
Cindy did tell me at Amna's party that she wanted to talk and I'm not sure why it never happened exactly
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Author:
Hudson (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ive loved poetry all my life. i was 19 when i had just been declared disabled by doctor but not goverment yet. i missed my old life and was about to go crazy. i didnt really feel bad so i kept on despite the doctor tellin me not to stress. my disability kicked in. i started writing and expressing myself out of fear for years. my first poem i shared on facebook was personal. i tweaked it and posted it. i tweaked it some more
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never stop tweaking, refining and sharing
I like your straightforward style
anchoring, your emotive portrayals
to everyday expressions
your readers can relate to, so easily
thanks, dude. means alot
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