Share with me your sacred moments
your most remembered stories,
including the ones once forgotten
and all the horrors and the glories.
Let your love out, free
don't leave things left to hide
It's advised not to die
with your songs left to fester inside
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Author:
Draven (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I was listening to a meditation the other day and one thing was said that resonated with me "Don't die with your song inside". THIS is so important and it is why I am pushing myself to write AND POST and PUBLISH my poems and writing more often. I have a lot to say, sometimes I don't know how to say it or I am scared with with whom to share it. But, I suppose it doesn't totally matter. :)
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Comments5
I agree with every syllable, of your write and even more-so with your author's comment..
never be scared to share, at least with me, dear Poet
Sing your Truth: Loud n Proud!
else they choke you, drowning
under all those
unshed, frustrations and regrets..
ink them loose
and walk a little lighter, in life
How correct you are! I wish I heard this advice sooner! Thank you 🙂
A sound and well written piece of advice to end your two stanza posting today dear Draven - - I am now singing my moments with fresh vigour and thank you for this caring reminder.
Wonderful, thank you so much Fay. I am glad it spoke to you. I will let it be a reminder to me as well 🙂 Practice what you preach, hey?
Spot on, life is short enough, get out there and scream at the world.
>D Haha exactly!
I simply love your authors note ... and your post today is the cherry on the cake ... awesome ink my dear Draven .. N
Thank you so much for your kind words, Neville!
Good advice. Thank you.
🙂
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