Finally Past
These two letters Ms, very hard to deal,
Right along there's Lucas, a throbbing feel,
Of disruption, lack of function, a struggle to fight,
Fear of failing to these sicknesses, a meaningless life,
As the condition, ourselves, we refuse to quit,
With this faithful suit of amor, we believe, and equip,
What has to happen, hasn't happen, but we're close to the ending,
Life without hurt, nor pain just like the begining,
Yes we're finished we'll say, no reasons for caution,
Very peaceful, no worries, what Jehovah has promised,
Due to the matters at first, our sites were a crash,
Around the corners so close, this pain Has Finally Past..
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Author:
Raymond Jones (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 31st, 2022 22:15
- Comment from author about the poem: Me as the writer I was born with a very harsh disease known as MS. Having seizures weekly, enormous numbers of falls each day. So with this poem it's not just for myself, but also for those that are struggling with problems themselves with health problems. Much love goes to my mother, and sister for there help with this. Keep your hearts open, Jehovah promises a better ending.
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Comments1
sorry for the suffering you've had to go through
so happy you have loved ones nearby, to help
and that you have wisdom enough, to cherish them...
'As the condition, ourselves, we refuse to quit,
With this faithful suit of amor, we believe, and equip,'
yes, I like the thought of intrusting in love
(whatever your translation of love is,
at the very least
it should be better than hate)
thanks for sharing..
'stay strong, dear poet!'
Thank You so much
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