Internal

Ash :)

The Person outside is someone I hate

The Person Inside is someone who awaits

Begging to come out of her shell

The girl who is living is not living well

Someone please help me to let her out

Id rather be the girl inside

Then to be stuck in a body I hate living outside

The girl in mind is someone I want to be 

But I guess Im stuck being me

 

  • Author: Ash :) (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 7th, 2022 17:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: I hate the way I look actually I hate everything about me :)
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 12
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Comments1

  • L. B. Mek

    any chance you can let both stay as they are
    instead, try and find a place
    in the rivers of your thought's
    maybe an island of sanctuary
    in your mind
    where they can both meet, eventually?
    see what each have to say, if anything?
    how alike or diverse they act
    maybe?
    if you glean an opportunity
    you may find some likeness'
    to exploit and thread your hope, upon
    and work, on accepting yourself
    broken and despairing, as you may be
    allow yourself, to be ok with that
    knowing
    so many in the world, are just
    as confused and splintered, as you are...
    only difference, being
    some, are trying to heal!
    (I wish you all the best! thanks for sharing
    keep writing)



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