Now I understand that, no matter how loud you choose to love her, it won't amount to anything if she ain't listening,
I've understood that loving is never wrong but a girl can be,
I've understood that their are some skies you as a star can never belong to, though you sure as death have every right to,
I've also learnt that maybe if I had a chance to put an expiry date on anything, I'd surely put it on people,so that you would know when it's time for them to leave,
I've also comprehended why, I had alot of reasons to give up but chose to stay,but she admitedly had a lot of reasons to stay but chose to leave,
And yes it is true,love doesn't hurt you but a person who doesn't know how to love you does,
Now I've got to find out if a broken heart really mends or it just finds out a way to live in it's million pieces,
I'm made to cry myself a river,mourn my emptiness as if the tears will freeze and fill my voids,
I miss the sky that as a star I can no longer belong to.
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Author:
Job Welime (
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- Category: Love
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The last line is so touching! Good job!
Thank you Dear poet
Thanks dear poet, cheers for reading,
Hey Job !! Hope everything is alright ?? Nice write , but hope its not what you feel right now !!
Hey Vamsi, life happened and I just approoted words from my situation to get a piece, am okay thanks for asking
'though you sure as death have every right to,'
'love doesn't hurt you but a person who doesn't know how to love you does,'
'mourn my emptiness as if the tears will freeze and fill my voids,
I miss the sky that as a star I can no longer belong to.'
(such dazzling lines!
such raw Truth
which translates
to such unblemished Beauty..)
so many great writes from you this week, it has been a privilege
to read each one, dear Poet
thank you!
I'm really glad it appealed to you dear poet
Lost love is always hard,but the wounds do heal, I don't know what you believe,but invest in the Lord,he will heal your broken heart,and bring you somebody really special,like he brought me and foreverjesus6 together,right here on this site.now we're happily married.there might even be somebody on this site for you too.let me ask you something,are you a Christian
Yes I am a Christian.
Can I introduce you to my friend.
She's moonchild1503
Went through bad breakup,would like to meet a good man
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Your expressions of love are always powerful, gifted one. I love how carefully this is woven together... Well done sir!
I'm glad it appealed, cheers for reading
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