Looking into the mirror of love
Seeing somebody
Person of perfection or opposite
Everyone watching at own somebody
Forgets their selves and just watch
Mirrors that became life
Not part of
An addiction
Mirrors of love makes possible to look outside
A new world
A wild jungle with hidden suprises
Sometimes enough food
Living forever
Maybe not, starving
Or deception
Eaten alive
Unpredictable
People believe a new world is needed
A life that needs two worlds
Forgetting it isn't always the best
More worlds, more division
Worlds aren't lungs
You can live without the other
One world brings already enough blood
To suffer and to live
An underrated secret treasure
People doesn't need mirrors to grow
Loving yourself is already enough
A new world can hurt permanently
Isn't needed to be alive
It's okay to stay
Maybe it makes you greater than ever
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Author:
Black hole (
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Comments1
tried my best to follow and hopefully
I've gleaned the theme of your message
but sadly, a lot was lost in translation..
still I thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic passion with us
Do you think it's possible to give some examples?😅
That gives me an expression on where to focus to😬
Thanks btw for commenting
I think it's a language thing, more than poetry
don't worry, if you enjoy writing
and find it fun, just keep doing it
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