I’ll never fear, from you, caprice.
For your sweet love will never cease.
Just once I feared you’d turned at bay,
when you were forced to sail away.
But deep inside (I since have learned)
your aching heart, for me, still yearned.
And distance, in cahoots with time,
did merely raise romantic rhyme
that I would pour like precious blood
when you returned, to me, for good.
And so, my gorgeous goddess true,
the life I've spent on loving you
was not a bag of broken dreams
submerged in sad satanic streams.
First love’s a flame, and love that burns,
on angel wings, one day, returns!
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Author:
Blue-eyed Bolla (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 18th, 2022 03:12
- Comment from author about the poem: for my first love flame - Lorraine
- Category: Love
- Views: 27
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Vamsi Sudha, Laura🌻
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Comments3
Nice touchy one poet !! Hope your first love flame did have a look at this !!:)
Thank you, Vamsi. After 30 years apart, we finally got back together.
That's awesome and a moment of celebration. This poetry goes as a toast for you !!!
'And distance, in cahoots with time,
did merely raise romantic rhyme
that I would pour like precious blood
when you returned, to me, for good.
And so, my gorgeous goddess true,
the life I've spent on loving you'..
(your Poetry, at its most sincere
and majestic, best
'in my humble opinion')
such a great read, my friend
thank you!
Thank you LB. I really appreciate your feedback. But truly, my poor little rhymes don't deserve such wonderful comments.
Kevin,
Another amazing write. I’ll never tire of reading your poems dedicated to your goddess, Lorraine.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
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