Like the echoes of an empty metal drum
That reverberates the certainty of your absence
You are everywhere but nowhere
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: February 18th, 2022 04:27
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'prickly emotional reverbs
that resonate, long
after, love's drumsticks
have been relinquished...'
(a wonderfully worded shorty
so relatable, thanks for sharing)
Thank you so much for taking you time to review my poem, Your comment was most wonderful and poetic itself. Thank you again
Your Poem seems to have theme of disconnection and the unpredictability of emotions.to me how one becomes a Ghost.
Thank you so much for the read and kind words of interpretation. Ghosts are all around us some good some bad some kind some sad. Ghosts nothing more than our memories that haunt us without response and infiltrate our dreams where they are sometimes put to sleep and at others awaken us to a new day.
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