...the leaves, the wind, and the moon spoke of love...
We frolicked in the sunlight and
Autumn played in our hair
Voices were heard and there was
Laughter
The clouds rested as the
Fire crackled
Twigs were picked up and burned
Hazy smoke met a late summer
Day
We said hello to fall as children
Played
Adler and I quietly explored the woods
Where pine cones were examined
And bagged
He held one up to the sky and deemed
That it was
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L
I laughed and hugged him and
Twirled him in the air
Marie followed
And walked barefoot with care
There was earth and acorns galore
I wouldn't have wanted it any other
Way
The sun just smiled
And then there was the night
The stillness in the cabin as grandchildren slept
And dreamed dreams
Those starlight moments between
Dusk and dawn
The hours before the children awoke
Morning waiting
For their next song
Treetops spoke of love as
Earth met sky
They held my heart
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Author:
Jane Clemons (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is a favorite of mine. I wrote this in the fall of 2021 after spending time in Northern Wisconsin with my young grandchildren
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Good write Jane.
Thank you ! It was such a special time for me
Thank you so much for your comment today on my poem, "Before you went away ". Your response was amusing to me and much appreciated. Unfortunately, as I went to reply to you, I accidently hit the delete button instead of the reply button. So, sadly I no longer have your comment, but wish I could read it again ! Thanks, and sorry
A sensitive write Jane.
Hello. lol. Well, I was on about, if it was a fun poem, I would add :'OK, I won't go; I'll come back; dunno why I went away in the first place!' heehee. Me talking rubbish basically.
Thanks. I think you response was a fun twist on my poem ! I enjoyed your comment
how wonderfully wholesome, a lovely read
thanks for sharing
Thank you for your wonderful comment....it made my day !
Ah such apt imagery that will linger long in readers' minds Jane and those precious moments will stay forever in your memory book of wonderful times spent with young loved ones. A read to remember and thank you for sharing it.
Thank you for your kind words. I will cherish those moments always ! I have 6 young grandchildren ages two to eleven, and the time spent was with four of them who live in Wisconsin. It was written from the heart ! I am new on this site, and have much to learn, so appreciate your comment !
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