You’re back, like early Spring
and each new moment
feels delicate, like a budding leaf
this time, we won’t let passing seasons
make us falter
we’ll hold on
through, rusting
of Autumn’s leaves
and that bitter bleak of Winter’s freeze.
No, this time we’ll find our way
to that highlight Summer
of our love’s: happily ever-after.
© L. B. Mek
February 2022
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Lets the "US" continue for many seasons and many more years. Nice smooth love !! Thanks MEK !!
indeed, what a beautifully worded summarisation
thank you, dear poet
Holding the tears
I wish to connect the dots
The dots of the laughter
The dots of smile
Holding the past treasured
While cherishing the present inside
A beautiful poetry dear Mek
Love and seasons resonating and amplifying in life….
'Love and seasons resonating and amplifying, life….'
that's just gorgeous, thank you! dear poet
Lovely and uplifting!
thank you, Dove
if a love poet of your calibre approves
then I'll assume
this was one of my better efforts
Very romantic, I hope that the person it was written for appreciates its beauty. I particularly enjoyed the last stanza, it gives such a feeling of permanence.
I'll admit, I'm a bit of a cynic
so 'happily ever-after's'
are as good as mythology, in my eyes
but when you witness it
in other peoples lives, you can't help
but wish it to be something tangible
at least for their sake..
and thank you, the last line of your comment
is a wonderful wording
of the hope we all aspire for!
(even us grumpy old cynics) lol
Summer of love expressed so well I can't wait to lay down and watch the world go passed... without all the layers covering my arse....
lol
(guess it's those Kylie short-shorts for you soon, my friend)
and thank you, for reflecting the light-hearted tone
of a burgeoning romance I tried to convey in my scribble
Us may only be x1 letter more than I but dont it feel so much bigger & better than that ..
p.s the more often I visit these words, the greater the depth I find here ... as far as poems go, this is splendid ...................... Neville
'Us' may only be x1 letter more
than 'I'
but don't it feel so much bigger & better
than that ..
(best poem on this page, by a mile!!!)
thank you, Hyung
So romantic and beautiful…..
what a lovely comment
thank you, dear poet
May that love never fail Mek, I am sure that it will not.
Andy
what a wonderful prayer
and yes, love needs confidence
to succeed, tepid feelings
tend to get distracted, too easily..
thanks Andy
Beautiful words ! It was lovely
thank you! glad you enjoyed the read
I like how you use the changing seasons as a backdrop to the uplifting tale of love returning. The images of the budding leaf, rusting of autumn’s leaves, the bitter bleak of winter’s freeze and the highlight of summer are incredibly beautiful. Also, I like how you show love’s determination not to let these passing seasons make you falter, and that you are determined to fight your way to love’s happy conclusion. Overall, an uplifting, determined poem that celebrates the invincibility and strength of true love. The last stanza seems to imply that last time the lovers somehow lost their way to the highlight of summer. The ‘No’ of determination sounds out triumphantly: We will make it work this time! Excellent poem, LB.
I was so nervous,
and yet here your words, surpass
even my wildest of hopeful dreams;
I cherish you taking the Time
to break it all down
and review my effort
with such forgiving eyes.
(Humbly, I thank you
with utmost sincerity.)
'The ‘No’ of determination sounds out triumphantly: We will make it work this time!'
I pray that you do and wish you the very Best!
I look forward to reading more of your inspiration poetry, dear Poet
I love love! This poem encapsulated it so LOVELY as well! Continue living your "happily ever-after!" 💖💖
what a wonderful comment and wish, to gift another
thank you! kind poet
I can only say I want more, I really enjoyed reading and reading
glad you enjoyed it, and there's so much quality poetry
here on MPS, that you can read to your heart's content...
thank you for your encouraging words, how very kind
Goodbye past, hello future.
Just the mention of the sun and all feels good.
right? I said recently
'only those who fight to survive and make it
to the morning's Dawn
can have a chance of witnessing that promise held
in a New Dawning'..
(really appreciate your gesture of support my friend
and your succinct comment, thank you!
""""""this time, we won’t let passing seasons
make us falter
we’ll hold on
through, rusting
of Autumn’s leaves
and that bitter bleak of Winter’s freeze.""""
a deep desire of lover making love an eternity; subject to not any season and clime, ...... poetic in true sense!
thank you! for such an encouraging comment
so glad you enjoyed the read, dear poet
This is beautiful )) I truly love your words . Their is such a gentleness to every line .. a poem I may want to read again . Making it a favourite ..
Love can be so nice . And if some relationship is meant ti be it will be .. even through difficult times
so very true, dear Poet
and how very kind of you, am so happy
you liked this personal favourite of mine
thank you!
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