That one

spilleronsheet

As time passed by 

was it years aback 

when our eyes met 

where were you ?

those dark eyes 

gazed 

looked straight 

 

well 

its been years of struggle 

buried deep inside 

fell wanted to escape at every might 

 

 

suddenly realised 

the reflection 

that caught straight one night 

fell in love with the younger inside 

voracious and curious 

clumsy and audacious 

shaky and determined 

Flowing with the winds 

  • Author: spilleronsheet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 26th, 2022 12:01
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville

    I think I must write out several thousand times ... 'I must not keep agreeing with Teddy' .... but why not, I ask myself repeatedly .. she is so bloomin write ... that final stanza of yours is surely among the best I have read & considered for a very long while ................💖 and hereby awarded the Teddy heart of excellence ......... Neville 🙂


    • spilleronsheet

      Wow
      That sums up two great friends of mine
      Whose always supporting me in every line
      Thanks dear Neville for cheering me
      And it makes me fly high
      And yes my dear Teddy she is always seeing through the poetry of mine
      Now both of you are giving me wings to fly high up catching the stars at night

    • Poetic Dan

      Not sure where you draw your words from but it's from a soul that has lived and still trying to shine.

      Thank you so much for sharing my friend

      Much peace and respect

      • spilleronsheet

        Your words keep me ablaze
        Allows me to glaze
        As if what lived
        Was not a mistake
        But a beautiful journey adorned
        Thanks a lot dear Friend, it gives immense hope and courage inside

        • Poetic Dan

          So glad to return the favour!

        • Rozina

          Yes very beautiful lines of love. Thank you for sharing this.

          • spilleronsheet

            Thanks a lot Rozina
            It sure makes one bubbly after words of praise

          • Paul Bell

            It never matters how far back in time it is, it's in the present. Some things you can change in the present, that suits your mood at that particular time, before it all has to drift back into the past.

            • spilleronsheet

              And that’s a deep thought
              A moment to halt
              To realise what you said was a multiple times right



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