I did try,
But no matter how hard, I try,
I can't make you smile,
Or you decided not to smile,
Am I that bad in your eyes?
I tried to be praiseworthy in your eyes,
Even forgot what was I,
Still you never made me feel like,
I did fine,
Should I hang on,
Or should I die,
Then,
Will you tell me I did fine?
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Author:
aria (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 27th, 2022 08:45
- Comment from author about the poem: This is the very first poem i have written. In reality i can't say anything to anyone coz i'm very introvert that's why i write poems.hope you all liked it.
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
🤞it did quite reach me
hope you are fine
Yes I’m doing fine. Thank you.
Hi,
Visited your page to get some more of your thoughts. Sad I didn’t find a new poem.
Honestly, I Miss your work.
Hii!! Glad to hear you miss my work... Will post soonn.. ❤actually my mental health was not good so took a long break ig🥲
That’s sad
Hope you recover fully soonest
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