Notice of absence from Doggerel Dave
Not absent - still here!
Keep Calm and Carry On Poeming. 😂
Not absent - still here!
Keep Calm and Carry On Poeming. 😂
Just when did war’s solution become love?
No past conflict managed to hear that plea.
Have you no answer from your Lord above?
It’s Deep History which provides the key.
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Doggerel Dave (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: .......No more 'we' and 'love' please...... 5/3/22 A reworked edit. Message remains the same. Re-posted as"Once More With Feeling.."
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Fully endorse your thoughts.Let us pray it will end soon
No, my third line, I hope, indicates that, without offense, I don't believe in the power of prayer, unfortunately.
Thanks, however for your attention,T.
I am evidently on your side sir ...
Thanks Nev. I may have to post it again - it shot through the Latest Poems column extremely fast: I'll have to be more strategic about when I put up my next effort (if any).
I'm sure some here find me a grouch, but I do feel need to keep it real.
it takes all sorts, but I for one hope you continue to post ............... N
Thanks for that, Nev - I'm not sure I can keep away, however irritated I find myself with some contributions here....You do rightly point out that it takes all sorts...
I reworked this piece in the hope of greater clarity.
No change in message.
Dictators dictate, and we now see what happens when they do. The west hope he'll disappear, as they usually do, but a country could be wiped out by then.
Fair analysis - trouble is some seem to survive for an inordinate length of time before they disappear and in the meantime inflict the kind of damage to innocent civilians you note.
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