The red string of fate
The string that upon your asking opens its gates
As a bright light envelopes you
So blinding so bright
As it guides you through the gates of fate
It’s questioning you
It’s judging you in such a formally manner
It’s determining if you are worthy to have a good fate gift by the gods
If you are not worthy you are thrown away
Like an apple you are slowly rotting away dying a slow and painful death
The string…The string of fate…
The string that will determine if you have a good life or not
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Author:
Susanne (Pseudonym) (
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I do like the lore of the red string of fate
but mainly because, it's potentially limitless
in length
and so, you can miss your opportunities
time n again
and still have that same string cross your path,
but if you stay still and give-in
to those stumbles and momentary defeats
the string will also remain listless
and seemingly distant..
so yes, fate can be cruel
but we still have some say
in what 'good' we can
curate
out of our own lives...
(good imagery and expressive writing, thanks for sharing)
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