Have I made it up to you?
I am hopeful, no worry,
You can take your time
there is no hurry.
Thank you for many things,
including your existence.
You have been very fair,
despite my persistence.
I don't know what
we two will create?
Cosmos has blessed us
and led me to my mate.
All that belongs to you
is something that grows slow,
be it knowledge, wealth,
friendship or true love.
If you feel ever entrapped,
brave the fear and express.
Love is ethereal and forever
and gods are here to bless.
I will dress nicely one day
and ask you for a dance
before the end of the days
why shall I miss this chance?
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Author:
Max (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: In order to impress his lover, hw make makes lots of effoers and expects that his lover be impressed, may be she fears. he propmts her to take a step and await blessing of gods. The thinks such as knowledge, money, frienship and love, when grow slowly one is able ti innate them and hence they only truly belong to the one.
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Comments1
I love the solace you weaved within these words
what an eloquently kind, inking
of the subtle gentleness
in our life's pebble dreams of hope:
'All that belongs to you is
something that grows slow
be it knowledge, wealth
friendship or true love.
If you feel restricted
layoff the fear and express
Love is forever
Gods are there to bless.
I will dress nicely one day
and ask to for a dance
before the end of days
why shall I miss this chance?'
(thanks for sharing
such a great read!)
Thank you so much for the pleasent words, you are so kind in your appreciation.
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