A promise of luxury
is rich men's thuggery,
to take away the strife
and the challenges of life.
Challenges that define us,
and boost us on a big plus,
occasionally it may also seem,
that we are living the dream.
Promises by the dwarf
are the stars for your scarf,
and a picture so rosy
that life may appear cosy.
Who promises you the moon
his love may erode soon.
It's an idea so obscure,
for gullible, it works for sure.
The pride of the strong,
that he never goes wrong.
To him, his promise to protect
is an idea so perfect.
If you agree with his inference
and never have a difference.
You may even live for a while,
without happiness or smile.
The realist will choose
without any excuse
the ideas stereotype,
avoiding all the hype.
These verses have a semantic,
an idea so romantic.
There are some hidden signs,
a message in between the lines.
What the poet wants to say,
that you keep the others away.
He is different from the above,
with a heart full of love.
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Author:
Max (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 9th, 2022 03:47
- Comment from author about the poem: The lover is insecure, he thinks he may not meet up to the expectation of his lover. He desperately wants to ouster the others by finding faults in them. Definetly not healty but still pure and then everything is fair in love and war.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Great writing ! Like this ))
Thank you so much, your words have the fragrance of your name.
Nice one Malik ! Different outlook and well written.
Thank you so much... 👍
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