I close my eyes and feel your ghost around me
an angel without wings in starlight
I close my eyes and feel your ghost around me
breathing ever so softly
I bloom under dark sun
your soft skin glistens in the sun
and when the sky grows dark
you reduce me to the thinnest pulp
and I wonder
and I wonder
why did you leave me here
numb in this iridescent
moonlight?
I close my eyes and feel your ghost around me
an angel without wings in starlight
I close my eyes and feel your ghost around me
breathing ever so softly.
- Author: Jordan Cash (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 9th, 2022 18:52
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments1
its a crime, your poetry
doesn't get the attention
and appreciation it deserves
on MPS..
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
some poems are better left hidden
but in all honesty, it's a little disheartening when you put so much time, effort, attention, and pain into your work, only for it to be seen by few eyes (although I'm grateful for anyone who cares to read). It's sadly part and parcel of art, when you care so much about it, that you'll never fully be recognised or understood. I've long come to terms with that and understand the brutality of existing within such a small realm, when I post a poem and like only five people read it. It's easy to think, what's even the point? The truth is... I'm only posting on this site because I have so many poems written and saved on my PC and various discs, so many poems and numerous journals filled, but it's nice to see them looking fancy I guess. Maybe I shouldn't be so prolific, but I've yet to feel burned out. I'm compelled to write, the desire lives in my bones, an innate habit. I'm actually in the process of writing the poems I've posted here out into a thick blue-velvet journal I have, a quarter done, because I like to see my words live on real pages I can touch and flip over. I don't foresee myself posting here indefinitely, it's becoming tedious. I miss the times when I would write before I even joined here, before I necessarily cared. I can't even believe this coming December marks three years I've been here, what a whirlwind. Sorry for the long response, it's just how I feel.
'Maybe I shouldn't be so prolific, but
I've yet to feel burned out. I'm compelled to write
the desire lives in my bones, an innate habit.'
(may you permit me, to draw a thread of likeness
from your words to that of Keats
who, lest we forget
was never a popular writer in his Time...)
quote taken from his letters:
'I find that I cannot exist without poetry—
without eternal poetry—half the day will not do—
the whole of it—I began with a little, but habit
has made me a Leviathan—
I had become all in a Tremble
from not having written any thing of late—
the Sonnet over leaf did me some good.
I slept the better last night for it—
this Morning, however, I am nearly as bad again—'
(as a mere humble scribbler
I can promise to read and value, any poetry
you choose to share and wish you
a never-ending romance
with this leviathan Beast, we name: Poetry)
please, forgive my overzealous nature
all these words above
are just my elaborate way
of saying that I, for one
cherish the poetry you choose to share
and wish you the very best
of whatever success
you wish to strive for in life and your poetry
dear Poet..
thank you!
God, I haven't read Keats in aeons.
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