Diphthong (+1)

Kurt Philip Behm

People are people

—and a fool is but a fool

 

(Dreamsleep: March, 2022)

 

 

Drums Through The Bramble

 

Atheist or Pagan

which gets to dream

reasoning stilted

 spirits unseen

 

Rational narcissist

tribal taboos

if given the choice

it’s easy to choose

 

Atheist or Pagan

contrast to compare

the first in self-worship

—the second aware

 

(Dreamsleep: March, 2022)

  • Author: Kurt Philip Behm (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2022 10:29
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  • rrodriguez

    Indeed. As a dog returns to its vomit, so a fool repeats his folly (Prov. 26:11).

  • Kurt Philip Behm

    Thanks R. Good to hear from you.

  • LaurašŸŒ»

    Kurt,

    When I saw the title of your poem, ā€˜Diphthongā€™, I remembered how challenging it was for me to learn English. (Sorry for digressing a bit.)

    ā€¢ ā€œDiphthongā€
    ā€˜People are people
    ā€”and a fool is but a foolā€™

    I wonder how many readers would have thought of that befitting title for your two line poem. IMO, not many. After all You are the master of your craft, my dear Poet.

    ā€¢ ā€œDrums Through The Brambleā€
    ā€˜Atheist or Pagan
    contrast to compare
    the first in self-worship
    ā€”the second awareā€™

    Flowing and smoothā€¦a delight to read. I enjoyed the rhyme, rhythm and the contrasting and comparing of the subject matter. It took me to one of my favorite professionā€”teaching.

    Thank you for sharing.

    LaurašŸŒ»





  • Kurt Philip Behm

    Thanks, Iā€™ve always loved that word but havenā€™t had the chance to use it much.

    • LaurašŸŒ»

      My pleasureā€¦ šŸ¤—

      ā€¦and today you did it justice.šŸ‘

      Patience and Time are ā€œthe most powerful warriorsā€.



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