People are people
—and a fool is but a fool
(Dreamsleep: March, 2022)
Drums Through The Bramble
Atheist or Pagan
which gets to dream
reasoning stilted
spirits unseen
Rational narcissist
tribal taboos
if given the choice
it’s easy to choose
Atheist or Pagan
contrast to compare
the first in self-worship
—the second aware
(Dreamsleep: March, 2022)
- Author: Kurt Philip Behm ( Offline)
- Published: March 11th, 2022 10:29
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
Indeed. As a dog returns to its vomit, so a fool repeats his folly (Prov. 26:11).
Thanks R. Good to hear from you.
Kurt,
When I saw the title of your poem, āDiphthongā, I remembered how challenging it was for me to learn English. (Sorry for digressing a bit.)
ā¢ āDiphthongā
āPeople are people
āand a fool is but a foolā
I wonder how many readers would have thought of that befitting title for your two line poem. IMO, not many. After all You are the master of your craft, my dear Poet.
ā¢ āDrums Through The Brambleā
āAtheist or Pagan
contrast to compare
the first in self-worship
āthe second awareā
Flowing and smoothā¦a delight to read. I enjoyed the rhyme, rhythm and the contrasting and comparing of the subject matter. It took me to one of my favorite professionāteaching.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
Thanks, Iāve always loved that word but havenāt had the chance to use it much.
My pleasureā¦ š¤
ā¦and today you did it justice.š
Patience and Time are āthe most powerful warriorsā.
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