breath of life,
shoes,hat,gloves,
flashlight lit the path,
breathing the crisp Fall air,
joy, prayers of gratefulness,
stars bright,
Orion,
grasses, leaves glittering,
footbridge sparkling like a thousand diamonds,
leading to a distant land,
Narnia, Terrabithia,
flip side,
some kind of magic,
heart spills open,
everywhere,
no place,
listen to the wind, trees, grasses,
grateful for the peace, the life,
the moments,
life essence,
so close,
so far away.
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Author:
aburmeister (
Offline) - Published: March 13th, 2022 16:20
- Comment from author about the poem: Inspired after a run and thinking, putting words down on paper
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Comments1
wonderfully creative and I think you managed to get across
that panting, out of breath
urgency
in your depiction of emotions, felt
in that moment
but noting, them being accumulative
of your life's experiences..
really good pacing and liked
the droplets of contextual details
you sprinkled to give this a more
personal, feel
'bridge to Terabithia' imagery
invoking so much
by utilising that one word, so precisely
'sparkling like a thousand diamond'..
just such a lovely read, thanks for sharing
Thank you so much for reading and your input! I appreciate it so much🙏🌼
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